Comments of chapter undefined of Somniate: Rise of the Faey Queen
Somniate: Rise of the Faey Queen
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opening chapter is ok, not painfully dull as people might think at first.. there is some personality there.. maybe could need a few adjustements with the flow of the scene.. from fast to slow? there are moments that dont need clarification, let the readers use their imagination.. sarcasm could go a long way too very nice work overall
