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Comments of chapter undefined of Newborn King: Birth of a Legend

InkLone
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Afterword: okay so um.. this was my first time writing but I've read lots of Mangas and Manhwas and since I DON'T KNOW how to draw I just wrote. I don't know if my novel really suits your taste but thanks for the views and reviews that I get from you guys. Don't expect too much and thank you for reading!

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Seradgi_Nasuioloer
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Awesome You need some grammatical and spelling corrections This has a common premise but I will see how far it will go I have hope

Hormin_Mangfi
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The world building is fineeeee I wonder if his past as a king, will affect his life in this world? And what was his world like? It appears to be somewhat futuristic and in sci-fi This world is interesting

Dreamy_Aislinn
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This is really good it is so thrilling I wonder if it would affect the future by coming back to the past so exciting