Wolfick
The way this novel is handeled makes me happy. At this point in the story an inflection point would have occured, where the story shifts into a new story, that is told in a new way. Cutting it of before it happens to possibly start a new story that can grow on its own is good. It would not be bogged down by how this story was told. It can be a new story with a new flow, its own story. Keep up the good work. May you keep true to yourself, your story and your characters. I wish you all the best.