Comments of chapter undefined of The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)

story building completely wrong on so many levels

I like the start, ignore those that are saying story building is wrong, its perfect just the way it is and they cant see that.

Just... ignore the trolls

Bro come on… i was loving the start until the poster. That messed up the whole vibe

Arent you forgetting youll have to gight that god one day

It was good except for the poster and stuff and by advance technology please dont do guns and stuff they wouldnt work anyways.

Boring

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This is funny XD thx

nice story

Наrem?

Instead of Im use I'm and nice story, lot of potential and good grammar, thank god

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍👍

Nice beginning. I will supervise for further development. thank you author (Google Translate)

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