Comments of chapter undefined of Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess
Thank you for this, author. Hopefully, we’ll see these characters again soon and if the spoiler synopsis is any indication, the drama will be intense and I’ll love every minute of it!
champilyn:Hello! Just want to say that the sequel for this novel is now serializing. If interested, the title is ‘treacherous hearts: return of the second male lead’ you may add it to your lib! Thanks!!!!
So basically the 200-300 chapters with Serena and Charlton meant nothing…… He basically only gets with her in the end because the ML of that world dies….. He becomes glorified even though at the beginning he was having an affair, and later raped the FL😭😭 meanwhile Charlton becomes a stand in…… Just give him a different girl if u ever decide to continue
Requesting the author to not kill Geoffrey. Now come on, we're so used to him now. Please make a story like Serena would dream of her previous life (in which she died and travelled to the current story) and in that life her husband was DUN! DUN! DUN! - Charlton! Yes Please make it a win-win situation for both Geoffrey and Charlton. I suggest a plot like Geoffrey saved Selena and was just wounded, Charlton saved him and later right before Selena attacked Christopher and the rebels, he will reveal himself and they will get together. Selena will promise that if she lives an another life, she will marry him for sure (and she does, in the previous life in the modern times). After this fantasy book you can write a new story of Selena and Charlton, and how they got together in the modern times. Tbh the timeline to me is like - Timeline first - Geoffrey was in love with the female lead, Selena is the Villainess and dies, ML along with his friends regrets and Charlton who started loving her wishes to God for her happy ending. Timeline 2 (modern times) - Charlton and Selena got together, lived happily forever. Selena dies and goes back to Timeline 1 thinking that it was a novel which she read but turns out it was written by her husband, Charlton kr Charlie (as he went by) to warn her about the future and how she can change it. Timeline 3 - Your book, in which Selena ends with Geoffrey. She remembers it all now, after spending a happy life she dies and her soul returns again for the last time to keep her promise with Charlton. She forgets all about the past lives and kind of feel connected with Charlton and they meet coincidentally, Charlton exclaims - found you! Oh Lord! Prolly I should write a book soon or something 😂. But here's just my ideas for you. Ofcourse, the book is yours so is the plot. xoxo
Please don't let Geoffrey die, it's a good ending but I don't want him to die, he was the ML he had to be happy, in the original story he had to live, he has suffered a lot to have such a cruel ending, I understand that now he doesn't It is all good, but it does not deserve to die, that Serena stays with whoever it is but Geoffrey does not die.thank you for writing this wonderful story.
Dear author, I was reading your book again from the beginning. Though with your amazing writing you managed us readers to let Geoffrey occupy a part of our heart but no to forget Serena and Charlton's love was quite justified the way it began. Selena knew that Geoffrey is in a relationship with Emily and that's why she went ahead with the Second Male Lead. Who knew that Geoffrey will leave Emily for her. So in the later chapters when it is revealed that Geoffrey assaulted Selena while she was asleep, and ofcourse he will try to justify his act by bringing up her and Charlton do not forget to mention about why she did all that and her falling in Charlton, Geoffrey is himself to be blamed for it. Please do bring up Emily and Geoffrey's matter in Selena's defense. Reminding you to avoid any plot-holes just in case cause Geoffrey seems to have forgotten all about his adultery even if it wasn't physical but he did cheated first. I know he was venting his anger and all that but not justified though. He played Emily then discarded her, even if Emily later turned out to be sour but what began between them had no filter. Also, I hope you sign a contract with webnovel soon to earn through your work ;) of you haven't - your avid reader and fan xoxo
Please dont kill jeoffery 😭 he is agood king ,, and he need to give his son the love he did not have when he was a child ,,, he finally Found a real family and happiness in his life ,, So please dont kill him 😭 Jeoffery action was wrong at the beginning so make him ask for forgiveness again and again and Give their life a lot Of spices but don’t separate them please 🥺 I dont like Charl and serena because the secret affair Thing at the beginning and for me they are Finshed and he was her first love but not the love of hEr life ,, he Can be with her in another time line ,, I really don’t want to see them back together again just because he was her first love 🤢
I’ve enjoyed the read. I’m sad you’ve felt let down by your readers, bullied into pushing their storyline. I enjoyed all the chapters, having a longer drawnout storyline. I hope you can one day come back to finish it the way you want it to be. I’m loving your new book and the fun, lighthearted feel to it. So, having a change of pace is a good thing too! Thank you!
hmmm....I am dissappointed that the story just ended tjat way, though there will be a sequel but still indefinite... I do understand your difficulties, but as a reader it send me a signal not to continue reading your other novel, because the situations here may happened again inyl the other stories, I do not want to spend too much money for half finished work. Just my opinion, nothing personal. No hate here, just honest opinion. hopefully your hiatus in this novel will not be that long...
It kinda sucks that she was given a second life just to fall in love be forced to marry a cheater who rapes her and then all this stress and drama. I'm like she would have been better off just being dead instead of reborn. Who wants to experience all of that pain and turmoil when you've already lived a happy life with your husband and died in peace?
I don’t like where the story goes. I keep skipping because I was rooting for the second lead. No need to prolong the story, you could have just ended the story with the second lead happy ending as well as the male lead. Why not make it simple and not complicated. Just stick with the title. im just disappinted.
so I think the spoiler is great.. giving us a sneak preview of that you have in mind but just couldn't put that in words.. is like your brain working faster than your fingers.. in my opinion, since you have made it in point form, that's a start for a new book and take it in your time to write it.. once you have that inspiration, don't stop. otherwise the feelings for that story will be lost.. there is a lot of going on this spoiler .. so I wish you all the best .. [img=recommend]
