I'm sorry, but if she doesn't realise what he has done to her, and then she either poisons or kills him in like 10 chapters, I'm done. Good luck though, I really like how you write.
champilyn:Yeah, I have been warned by a lot of people not to do this not to write It like this even Other co authors here told me this is death of a novel and readers hate it. but i wanted to write it because for Me it’s necessary for the story bec The CP is the CP, and if he does anything less, it’s so stupid for him. i mean he has been cheated on for 3 years by his fiance and His cousin and Even if she doesn’t love him, She Has an obligation to him. i mean i totally feeL the cp. but a Wrong does not make a wrong right. Anyway, i think i wrote it super well the next chapTers but it’s not a cup of tea many would like. 😅
Erm I just randonmly skip over 100 chp just to see whats happening on latest chp.... maybe I'll drop this book for a while and comeback when its completed. I had read novel that has ugly and dark story line. In the end, the author stop half-way and re-write a new story line. The female lead had been thru the worst of the worst that if i was in her shoes, I may kill myself. Its a dark story line. this novel kinda have the same vibe. Sorry dear author. I drop this novel as it may affect my mental health. 🙏😔
Actually they have to make sacrifice to have their happily ever after ,that was mention in the synopsis. But author will i have a little bit hope about cerena ..please author just tell me a spoiler , I just want to ease my heart ,that's it ,coz i know if love is gain after painful events ,it will be most sweetest .So please author is there any hope of cerena somehow,just somehow