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Comments of chapter undefined of 漢語;

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漢語;

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FluffyFatCat
FluffyFatCatLv1FluffyFatCat

I don't mind an opening begins with an action scenes, but this was a little bit too long, which make the phase a little bit slower. But overall, the grammar is perfect, the story was unique and interesting, and as an MMORPG player, necromancer is my favorite hero.

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RayVer
RayVerLv1RayVer

Good start.

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Dumpling_Aunt
Dumpling_AuntLv3Dumpling_Aunt

a great start... the action scenes😍😍😍