thanks for the chapter. I think overall, better descriptions could benefit the story a lot. more similes, metaphors... paint pictures of the scenes in the readers head.
well the mc is a dark guy not a hero maybe if he had memorys of the earth he can be different but he don´t have that only the spirit of a profesional assasin
The more he tells himself that he’s not a villain the less it sounds true. Also, most “villains” at least well written ones never see themselves as the villain of their own story.
