I agree. The perspective switches makes me care about the other characters and make them feel like they exist and breathe even when the story isn't talking about them
thanks for the chapter. I think overall, better descriptions could benefit the story a lot. more similes, metaphors... paint pictures of the scenes in the readers head.
Read a few chapters but was unable to continue. The grammar is atrocious. Sometimes the author completely forgets that "a" and "the" exists in the dictionary. Has a high rating but sadly I'll have to drop because my eyes
I really liked how the conversation went with Josiah's mother. It obviously still had the fantasy-esque feel to it but it also felt like they could've been real people trying to repair their relationship as parent and child.