Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

This seriously needs to be edited again. its barely readable. feels like its just been google translated and posted, without even being read.

I just don’t know how strong Kakashi would be if he trained. Yes he would be stronger then canon one but with Dojutsus everywhere a normal human without any Kekei Genkai can’t grow more then a certain limit. And just like author said his sharingan is a liability due to its chakra drainage. The peak we’ve seen was Gai and while he could keep up with 10-Tails Madara since he opened all 8 gates which was a death sentence Madara still lived because healing factor.

Terrible grammar.

What horrible grammar.

something is wrong here, the ability of Danzo's sharingan eyes should be izanagi not izanami so far in the Naruto series that is still alive in Canon only Itachi uchiha and even then he is intended use it when he is in edo tensei When he fought Kabuto, And again in the form of abilities the two are different, Izanagi has the ability to turn reality into an illusion which in its use so far has only been used to save the user from Death, While izanami if I'm not mistaken it's the opposite, Turning illusions into reality in the sight of the victim,In its use the user uses the victim's sensory stimuli to take him in a world of illusion of repetition, In that illusion the user is trapped in a paradoxical world without him realizing it, Yes and both have something in common, namely the side effect of blindness

Ty

I want to read this but the grammer makes it unreadable, not worth it if I have to go back every other sentance and correct it in my head.

Exp

Its edited version of ComradeMao, i think...

tnx

I hope he saves the Uchiha clan.

thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

This grammer is terrible and it feels like it was machine translated from somewhere and just not even looked at beyond that. The story is there and seems promising but it is currently unreadable.

Re reading this your grammar has significantly increased im impressed

i love naruto this book is gonna be good.

this will be good when kakashi soul still there and talk to him. and have double personality

Kakashi, Kakashi, Kakashi every sentence.