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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Marchioly
MarchiolyLv4Marchioly

Great book. no idea how this flew under my radar. i ended up binging the whole thing the past day or so. all in all it was a solid story with a refreshing plot. i was expecting more closure, but the ending was adequate and I wonder if the next book will continue on this story?

hars_bhansali
hars_bhansaliLv2hars_bhansali

What about Hermione and max come on you can atleast write a epilogue

King_Gluttony
King_GluttonyLv14King_Gluttony

Feels incomplete. We don't see Max let down his shields, get all his various masteries, get married to Hermione, have kids, etc. Can we please get an epilogue with a time skip like ten or fifteen years into the future?

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Karma_Mystery
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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

thank you for officially ending this so many writers on this site just stop in the middle of nowhere

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LordEgzekutor
LordEgzekutorLv1LordEgzekutor

Thank you for the story . It was wonderful.

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

This was really Disappointing. We never got to see he's future and we all know he and Hermione won't be together in the future, We never got to see Narcissa and Max finally building a Bond honestly I feel like this was a waste now.

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JmJgJh
JmJgJhLv4JmJgJh

Thanks for chapter :) ... So thats the ending .... quite sad ... So max have power of elder wand in his body ... i wonder if he could now cast wandlesly at the level of elder wand if yes then how powerfull would it be with his wand ...... Novel was nice ... I think there could be few chapters that would describe a few other matters (i don't write what matters but there could be a few more) but it would be kind of boring so its ends that way ... Little sad ending ... That would be all .... Anyway HAPPY NEW YEAR :)

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EmaCnDf
EmaCnDfLv4EmaCnDf

Fukllmetal alchemist reference at the end?

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GoldenLeafGrass
GoldenLeafGrassLv14GoldenLeafGrass

great novel. even with the open ending it's the best HP fanfic i have read until now.

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Silir
SilirLv15Silir

thank you for Great Fanfiction one of best i read on harry potter little disapointed in endig that he didnt make it clear with Hermione but well not everthing can be perfect

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Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

countdown to author-sama's return!

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Arrow_569
Arrow_569Lv4Arrow_569

u did it, great job author .

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Growl_16
Growl_16Lv4Growl_16

Hahhh, i really hope you make epiloge 10 years or so later about wizarding world. I'm really curious about the change in the wizarding world But Thank you for your work, i really love your work. And can't wait your next story. Happy new year btw.

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EchoingDusk
EchoingDuskLv3EchoingDusk

So this is it.

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Puyer_KQ3
Puyer_KQ3Lv4Puyer_KQ3

Aww so sad, the book has ended. I give you a power stone for thanks for me.

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Stehlque
StehlqueLv15Stehlque

Thank you for the story and all of the hard work. You have done a great job of sharing your imagination with us. Good luck with your future endevores.

Kal_El_4391
Kal_El_4391Lv4Kal_El_4391

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Mortem_Ouroboros
Mortem_OuroborosLv2Mortem_Ouroboros

Simplemente perfecto... es raro que acabe de leer algo porque ya se que va a pasar pero en fin una que otra sorpresa si me llevé jaja

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Race123
Race123Lv5Race123

Happy new year

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Homiene
HomieneLv14Homiene

What theme will the new book have? Also fanfic and when yes from what movie, book or comic? Liked the book and the very regular updates👌