Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Why is mc confused about everything .??

Why is the mc acting like someone who never read any fanfiction or novels about harry potter. It always seem to me he questions the stupidest things that could very well be answered.

Such forced plot holes to make our MC meet Moody this early. Author I presume your brain has been short circuited the last few chapters

Must you make these actions seem boring in some way. At the very least make use some amazing spell that either blinds the guy or better yet before leaving why didn't he disguise himself

I remember full metal alchemists with the clapping movements and thanks for the chapter 😎👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Did he just kill sirius?

There's no way mc would get away from Auror, let alone group. Mc is very skilled sure, but he's not even near graduate level yet. And Aurors are basically best graduates, that have further Auror training and experience. Also this chain of events is just total nonsense.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

WTH just happened? he walked into a quite block unknowingly and meet a criminal who took him hostage. Now mc kills him and those capturing the criminal mistakes the mc as criminal even after the obvious difference in body and look but, no! they have to capture mc without any reason and make mc gets trouble! Looks like author is giving forced plot but whatever, hope similar things doesn't happen multiple times. Previously he got kidnapped and now was taken hostage with similar circumstances where mc was easily not supposed to be...

turkey..... hmmm very sus,

This is unnecessary, just a reason to add some action.

the sentence structure got worse, what is this?it's like a few recognisable words and the rest is just noisewhat happened to the good story I was reading?

what the heck did I just read? I felt like I was tumbling through a dark void of twisting words and phrases that look familiar at first, but the more I concentrate on understanding the words written the more confused I got. with the amount of logic leaps and missing adjectives, you managed to create a weird experimental chapter. its like your words could perfectly inact cognitive dissonance. l should understand what's going and my brain is filling in the gaps of your poorly written paragraphs. yet, when I see the next word after trying to make sense of the gobbledygook leading to gobbledygook, my mind blanks and I have an aneurysm trying to slowly piece together a singular cohesive idea of what I just read.

I knew that criminal will die, mc just be like that most of the time.

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Poor Tonks

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

Thanks for the chapter