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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Aagnus
AagnusLv13Aagnus

hey author do you even read your novel? you cant just add things and let us reader figure it out. you make most of the chapters so confusing by rushing things without explanations and adding things without connection. im suspecting this fanfic as a translation.

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Hugo_Adam
Hugo_AdamLv4Hugo_Adam

i understand that Lucius must stay alive(for now) for plot reasons but can you promise me that when his usefulness expires the mc is going to kill him in the most painful way possible ?

UnderChain
UnderChainLv11UnderChain

Didn't he have a cut on his chest, when he healed? And how long did he spend kidnapped and cutting bricks with a sword? Because it wasn't mentioned anywhere as if it were another story

katorishi
katorishiLv5katorishi

I thought this would be an easy fix just claim Lord Black easy enough this will basically give you protection because killing some unwanted child of the malfoys is fine but killing the last black that would get him in deep s***you can then announce your relationship with the malfoys and how and how multiple assassination attempts have happen that forced your. To go public with your status as either Lord or hair of House Black maybe a few hints that Lucius was involved since he was the only one that knew about you

confused4you
confused4youLv4confused4you

I wand lucius dead

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1asdasdssf

Honestly mc's parents are like non-existent drones in this story.

JulianGanim
JulianGanimLv6JulianGanim

thanks

HPMan
HPManAuthorHPMan

Thanks for reading, everybody! A bonus chapter for Pure-Bloods will be tomorrow. Chapter 34 was twice as much as usual. It looks like I need some sleep.

DaoistoKHsUX
DaoistoKHsUXLv1DaoistoKHsUX

И почему он беспокоится о лорде-морде Я никогда не любил гг трясущихся над соблюдением канона Да я понимаю что знания событий дают преимущества, но если ценой этого преимущества будет ходить и оглядываться как бы дуэт белобрысиков еще чего не выкинул или переложил свой взгляд на его приемных родителей то нахуй такие преимущества Я больше всего тащусь когда гг посылает нахуй канон и вершит первозданный хаос

Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv3Monsieur_Dreamer

awww max is so sweet, worrying about where voldemort will live if he killed luciua..what a kind young man..

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

TeddyBear_With_Tie
TeddyBear_With_TieLv10TeddyBear_With_Tie

What do you mean Voldemort’s snake may already be a Horcrux, the reason Voldemort made his snake a horcux in the og plot is because most of his other horcux are destroyed, and nothing that major happened to change that. Also doesn’t mc already know this.

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

marco26l
marco26lLv5marco26l

Dzięki za rozdział!

Aku03
Aku03Lv6Aku03

Thanks for the chapter!

XiauJun
XiauJunLv5XiauJun

continue o excelente trabalho!!

marcosk00
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Acaro_venduto
Acaro_vendutoLv4Acaro_venduto

Thank you author-sama