Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

I like the setup so far but the English is just horrible. I hope it gets better. The vocabulary is usually ok. But the corresponding grammatic knowledge seems close to nonexistent.

"very fake singing" I m not sure it has the meaning you intent in english. "singing off key " should be better. You might try grammarly, even google traduction will help.

WHAT HAPPEN TO THE FROG?

I'm getting literal headaches reading this ff.

To meio perdido com a idade dele ele deveria ser pelo menos 1 ano mais novo que o drako então porque diabos ele parece ter a mesmo idade e entra no mesmo ano que ele?

Thanks for the chapters, I look forward to the next ones . Please update more.

Thanks for the chapters, I look forward to the next ones !!!

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter!!

MC sure sounds like someone who is f*ked up by life and do not know how to enjoy it anymore.

Thanks for the chapter!

so we just gon gloss over the fact that this author said "freshman" and not "first years"?

Thanks for the chapter