Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

I honestly have no idea what happened to him in the park that got him wounded. It wasn't clear what happened. Did he get shot?

So the MC looks like a trap? And having random visits by God is immersion breaking and bad.

so the dudes got Raizels Hemomancy from Noblesse?

i just ignored this whole chapter

The grammar is horrible, I can't understand what's going on.

Sooooooo What just happened???

am I the one unable to understand or what?

this chapter was way too messy

This chapter wasn't really clear. What is an emission? What does it bring to the story?

Jesus Christ, your english skills suck.

I think he got a blood clot or something like I heard when there is too much pressure inside the head there are air bubbles and stuff and they explode anyways I think it is a blood clot but I don't thing my definition of a blood clot is accurate so...

When does the grammar improve???

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

sorry but I can't understand what is happening

what?

nice work and thx

And it's a sword there's only 1 sword I know that is the lord's Ragnarok capable to create and control blood into range atk and shield barrier almost like a Noblesse but not too much.

I dont understand the whole novel at this point