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Carl_Joe

Carl_Joe

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love reading and sleeping. Small time author loves to write

2019-08-23 JoinedGhana
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe8h
    Commented

    honestly I have no idea what I just read. the English was all over the place . pauses and stops in places that are unnecessary. filled with nothing but short sentences

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    Harry Potter: New World
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe2yr
    Commented

    I thought you eat sleep write wash and repeat. how did u suddenly end up going to college and hockey?

    I was single and free! Contrary to popular belief, not all authors are fat and sweaty, or weak and skinny. I was a top athlete going to college to, hopefully, get a Law Degree in the end. I also played Hockey, man I loved playing. The rush of adrenaline, the cold wind slamming against my face, the constant awareness to avoid getting destroyed by another player, the intelligence required to make good plays, and the fights.
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    Monkey in the Multiverse
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Commented

    it's weird though. I'm trying so hard to not define background of the world. even after 7 chapters done I still haven't named the world yet.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 - Enter the Cultivators
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    i AM JAMES
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Commented

    was is just me who read that line with the batman voice?

    George turned around fast pointing his gun at the person who he couldn't believe was in his office, before him was the demon bat himself. " How did you get here?" "I'm batman."
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    Batman in MCU
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Commented

    it was so painful to read. I did not understand 90%of what I just read

    Ch 1 1.The New Beginning
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    Military System god realm revolution
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to YAMEROOOOO

    haha. still flat

    I had gotten slightly taller and my body was well toned with slender and packed muscles. Even I could not resist looking at my six packs unbelievingly from time to time. Oh, if the me from earth could see us now; Yes, we can.
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to Dark_Magma

    God of war. street fighter , mortal kombat

    'What battle instincts Negative two?' I really hated to admit it but she was right. Fine. How many GOW and MK and SF have I played? Including all the battle animes and mangas I have read and watched. Since I can think clearly now, then I will use it all to my advantage.
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to gingertabby

    that is why I say reading is an art. if you get triggered right of the bat after reading something just because it did not follow what you like nor the norm of things, instead of trying to find out why it is like that then you not a true reader. you only want to see what you want to see. it would be best to find something else that suits your tastes.

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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to Revenge_Knightess

    thank yo and enjoy the rest to come.

    Ch 35 Chapter 35
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to You3

    cap is a different case. for a person who jumped on a grenade to protect even when he did not have the serum does not really count. I'm talking about someone who would not do that. ends up bringing out something out of you.

    [A/N: Consciously or unconsciously, power sometimes corrupts. Whether in a major way or in a subtle and unnoticeable way without us realizing. It is weird, but that was just what I was trying to portray here. As humans it happens every time we gain power; with or without us noticing. Maybe it's just stupid. Sorry. Anyways, we got to 1m views so bonus chapter. Whoop whoop. More chapters on the way. Still writing the chunin arc so more chapters on the way.]
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to America_Yea

    consider it more like was beginning to lose herself to the power she had accumulated. don't forget he/she was just a person from earth only slightly over a year ago. I don't know about anyone else but I know as humans there is a chance of change especially gaining power you never really had as an earthling. Especially as an earthling where we never had that kind of power. I don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say

    [A/N: Consciously or unconsciously, power sometimes corrupts. Whether in a major way or in a subtle and unnoticeable way without us realizing. It is weird, but that was just what I was trying to portray here. As humans it happens every time we gain power; with or without us noticing. Maybe it's just stupid. Sorry. Anyways, we got to 1m views so bonus chapter. Whoop whoop. More chapters on the way. Still writing the chunin arc so more chapters on the way.]
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to DeRouge

    oh wow. that was fast

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to Nith_Haiah

    oh cool. thanks. will fix it

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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Commented

    oh that is an amazing idea. thanks so much. I'll use akali's attire and dragon. thanks

    Ch 49 Chapter 49
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to Sadarsa

    true. but not always so especially when it transfers to the review section. tomorrow I will send a string of one such review for all to see. it made no sense and his review was the only one I ever replied.

    [A/N: Ok, allow me to make a little noise here before we dive on to the chapter. I have seen a few reviews and comments and i had intended on ignoring the negativity but just let me say something real quick. Most that i see are mostly people trashing the fanfic because something was changed or is different from the original. Allow me to say IT'S A FRIGGING FANFIC. What's the point of it being a fanfic if as an Author, we cannot change things. If you want nothing to change then go read the original manga. Second, some seem to hate the fact that in the first few chapters the MC is not already eating dragon flesh and pulling down skies. There are a lot of other novels and fanfics out there with that kind of plot; I could even recommend a few if you like. Reading a novel or fanfic means to follow the MC on his wise, dumb and ugly journey. That is what reading is, not what you want the MC to do. If that is what you want, then write yours; Very simple. Some are just plain hating the novel just because it is Sakura. To them i say; Grow up. My MC is not some reborn Uchiha clan member or some Uzumaki or some Senju. My MC is Haruno Sakura, Civilian Born. I am using the abilities Kishimoto-sensei gave to her and writing based on mine and my friends' theories with my own added twists. If you dont like it, just quit reading. Thank you all for your time, the comments and constructive criticisms. Thank you for reading this. Enjoy the chapter]
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to Hat_Trick

    Medaka box season 2. Just watch Medaka box

    Shigusa Takachiho from medaka box. His Abnormality is his extraordinary reflexes. Unlike other people, who use reflexes for defense, evasion, or to retreat, Takachiho can even use his reflexes to attack and counter. He describes this skill as the "ability to put my brain on auto-pilot." Because his muscles fight without the use of his brain, this also leaves Takachiho free to strategize. Since his body moves on reflex and not reactions, feints and illusionary techniques such as Medaka's bunshin are useless against him. (if you haven't seen Medaka box, try it. Especially the season 2.)
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to gingertabby

    See, if you had come out the first time and did this we could have had a civilized conversation. 1. the rating is low because of thinking like that."sakura hate". 2. everyone that comes just like you seem to have a problem with the changes to the story but keep forgetting it is a fanfiction; which is the very definition of change. 3. reading is just as an art as writing. after reading why the hokage acts the way he does you don't go "ew" but "why?". at least to me that should be the reaction of a good reader. but like i said; because it is change people don't like it yet they want to read a fanfiction. completely contradictory. 4. have you thought about why people or you suddenly have/had a problem with such a change as this but will read a fanfiction with a system but be ok with the mc already more powerful than the hokage at 6 years old?(yes, I've read something like that and saw people so happy in the comments). Finally, as for the short chapters if you had read along you would have noticed it increases in content. I made them short because I am working on other things as well. that is a lot of work. did not want the chapters to swamp me.

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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to gingertabby

    how is that a review? you came straight out the gates with insults. so tell me where the review is? never mind that. just answer the question. what makes u hate sakura and call her useless? don't follow the crowd blindly and answer the question. stop getting your feelings hurt because you have nothing. so childish

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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to ShadowlessBlade

    true. I feel like Takachiho's abnormal was completely downplayed. but I get it. medaka's abilities was nothing to scoff at either, but still. that's plot armor for you

    Shigusa Takachiho from medaka box. His Abnormality is his extraordinary reflexes. Unlike other people, who use reflexes for defense, evasion, or to retreat, Takachiho can even use his reflexes to attack and counter. He describes this skill as the "ability to put my brain on auto-pilot." Because his muscles fight without the use of his brain, this also leaves Takachiho free to strategize. Since his body moves on reflex and not reactions, feints and illusionary techniques such as Medaka's bunshin are useless against him. (if you haven't seen Medaka box, try it. Especially the season 2.)
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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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  • Carl_Joe
    Carl_Joe3yr
    Replied to gingertabby

    i have ignored a lot of trash review on here but yours I will address. Are you that desperate for attention on here because you not getting it in RL? Do you have a reason for leaving such comment? Give me one reason aside the usual follow-the-crowd sakura hate. because those that say they hate sakura usually don't have any real reason. so tell me one proper reason for you writing such a review even though I clearly wrote in my synopsis not to if this novel was not for you. Else it would have made no sense whatsoever to write this and would mean you just want attention

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    I became Haruno Sakura?
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