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Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Shattered Dreams and Fellow Fiends...

MutedSith
MutedSithAuthorMutedSith

I’m actually scraping the special power thing, I’ll be adding Mechu Duru alongside a few others later into the story though.

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Terrier
TerrierLv5Terrier

Abilities suggestions: -fast learning -no system -blaster-arms mastery -corporate mind -pacifier/diplomat -droid works -respawn[ultra unlikely, who would like to relive death over and over?] -high mentality fortune -trading price haggle -smuggling expertise -linguistics -biologist -hacking -need for speed -Disguise [easier to pass as someone else] -bactoid prodigy -droid net networking -Jedi can shove off!

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Terrier
TerrierLv5Terrier

Please not another force user!!! Please!!! We already have load of those generic Jedi and grow stick up their asses monks here. Do an army man/corporate mastermind/hell outdo Palpy in his games/droid army supreme commander/archeologist/contraband runner/ colony governor/ from nobody to the BOSS/ etc. You can do it, just no force woodoo.

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Shameless_Buddha
Shameless_BuddhaLv6Shameless_Buddha

Can't wait for more chapters.

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Jaseth_Vencebi
Jaseth_VencebiLv14Jaseth_Vencebi

Whitebeard Power Hawkeye skills Force sensitive mystery high healing factor

Terrier
TerrierLv5Terrier

So is this story be going or its just a one shot story?

Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5Kickedelm0

If you do another fan-fiction can you do Cyberpunk 2077. With system but only that can help him become tycoon. And system like Deus Ex Machina, Metal Gear Solid and other games that have cybernetics?

Shameless_Buddha
Shameless_BuddhaLv6Shameless_Buddha

can't wait to see how this will turn out.

AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14AshuraMikoto

i have a good idea for special abilities how about : Force Drain

Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

if he has the force mechu-deru for sure, it's a sci fi verse ya need to talk to machines

WealthyBum
WealthyBumLv13WealthyBum

Lookin gucci so far!

MutedSith
MutedSithAuthorMutedSith

Again thank you for the suggestions.🧐😊 The Jedi order and Sith Empires haven’t even been established yet, so he won’t become some simpy, peace loving pot head. I have a rough outline of what I’d like to do with the Fan-Fic and Hadrian will start out as a Force Hound of the Infinite Empire.