Comments of chapter undefined of Land of Magic

you know, for someone malnourished and weak you sure complain a lot

Of course the story has the the tropes of abandoned/emotional house elf and all wizards/witches are idiots. Oh well.

Props to you author for tasting horse dung in order to allow us to know what potions taste like.

theres really a few mistakes in this chapter mostly missing letter or too much letter and also wth is inverta potion???

Why do everyone make wizards stupid? I get that there are some stuff that doesn't make sense in the books but that is because it was made to be a childrens book. People who can bend the world to their liking wouldn't be stupid.

Looking good so far 😃 MC seems to be the type to plan ahead. What's an invertia potion though? Is it something for healing/malnourishment?

wonder when he will try to get an inheritence test at gringots?

And he should be able to walk most likely after two weeks. not days.

First of all he has no diet so he's banded to be small so he's most likely not two and most likely is four, which would make a lot more sense because if he were two he would have not been put into that body as the body would have died way before Turing two.

I thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

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Thanks for the chap and i thought there were two eleves

Thank you

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