Comments of chapter undefined of Morphing Iniquity

I am a little confused... But really intrigued!

it really need patient to read until this chapter. At this chapter, I believe that the above two chapters is what David is thinking in his mind. Probably that is why it is so confusing. he has so many in his mind.

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Very confused and hard to follow - although some good points and paragraphs

The first two chapters had a lot of thoughts and caught me in this fascinating mind, that seemed to have things to share, experiences to tell. But this chapter, the story becomes fluent and the sudden gap to the Therapy session brings about this "aha" moment that intrigued me. What had happened in between from the moment in school to the moment in therapy. It made me think of what was mentioned about the homeless man, and the point was well made. It made me want to know more of the truth, and not just assume it. And for that, I want to read more to understand more and figure out this intriguing story.

Wow. Its mind blowing indeed