invayne
I love the more silly this op is it's a good balance between scary cat, naive, friendly and arrogant i hope she learns not all humans are bad and gets to have more adventures with this group or at least some of the people from this group. keep up your good work I love all your stories so far[img=recommend]
I know she's luke newly hatched and all, but she was 16 and a street rat before. that means she grew up hard. this butt-shaking and victory posing cutesy stuff is pushed a bit too much. especially the butt-stuff. can we speed up her maturity just a bit? also yes this is like a year too late but u asked for comments and im giving my main gripe. good story otherwise.