Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise of the Black Plain

Wow you just sold your Novel in the introduction Page 👏👏

I honestly could not tell that English was not your first language so far so props to you

I like harem and harem stories, harem stories are not bad for being harem, the harem is not the problem is the problem is when a harem has a mediocre development, a harem is not bad and it never will be, blame the bad development has it , not the harem itself

If you really stick to the things you have said in this chapter, then this will be a worthwhile novel and it will automatically get popular among all the other same filth that is trending on this garbage website

Well written, i understand where you come from being an author myself. 100% support

Authors gotta take some inspiration from LOTMs story telling cause it's superior to 99% of the stuff here on webnovel. Hopefully, I can say the same about this in time.

This cant be a cultivation story Then if theres no waY to immortality thats thE whole reason of cultivation to Get to immortal an The years They live in outher boOks liVing for billIons of years is like 10 Years some of thosE cultivators

Adorei sua percepção, espero que reflita no romance.

can you give us some rough discription of map in auxiliary chapters or rough sketches will also be sufficient

Man i respect you, I respect your opinions and hopefully i can see them applied

harem genre are double edge sword it's going to shine if in the right hand (author) I Hate Ship

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I feel your pain as an avid web novel reader. As a fellow amateur author, I felt compelled to write my own story. I read your opinion and I agree with every single problem you pointed out. I am sure I will enjoy your novel now :))

I have face the same when reading light novel on 'webnovel' it's mostly have the same story and afterwards I just dropped most of stories because of this but I hope that this one will be different than other's

Thanks for the intro.

Overall I can get behind what you're saying, but sometimes I struggle to read novels when English isn't their main language, so it's up in the air if I will read it long-term or not, but I'll be giving it a chance regardless

is stage 11 going to be the end stage or is there going to be a higher stage of cultivation that no one knows like how the MC has a higher stage of talent that no one knows about. are you going to do the same thing with cultivation