Comments of chapter undefined of Tech Priest and Immortal
Tech Priest and Immortal
Explorer_Avalon
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could you show where i made mistakes? i'm currently working on this novel alone so it's a little hard to see all of the mistakes
CassTheEevee:cool story dude, grammar could use a bit of work but otherwise, nice and creative