Comments of chapter undefined of The Insurrection of the Inept Hero

First time and it seems quite okay to me, gj

noice ..in some novels R-18 scene's take a long time and also describe every single action ..but we are not kids we know that much so this r18 scene was of my liking

Why would I skip this chapter if I read this because of R-18 tag hehe~

very detailed I could clearly imagine it

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

simple and noice

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap

It was fairly well done, author.

Very good hehehe

It was good to me