Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

The old version of this arc was boring because it didn’ t make sense it was like you tried to make leylin the protagonist o GOS but they are two completely different poeple. Leylin is an overlord who reached god level, this may be a new world but there is no reason for him to be afraid of the demon lords who are just rank 4 and rank 5 individuals, even before just a trace of his soul they are ants, and also making him pick up random things that are obsiosly calculate and belong to other powerful people and not just bind them but also depend on them is stupid and dangerous he should only believe on things that are his. Lastly when he went out of the immortal family and had to run and had no plan on coming back was also idiotic because they had lots of information that he didn’t colect and lots of resources he could study ancient records, martial arts etc this are the most important to him, because he can design his own path and became invencible, also leylin is a god, and this is a peace of his god soul so he shouldn’t have any bottleneck and there is no need of making this arc like a completely new novel because it will be too long and boring I almost forgot the characters in the original world because it has been too long. Bring a god and having a god souls means his calculation ability is much higher than other poeple he just need to gather information in the form of martial arts and energy and he can immediately breakthrough there is no need to slow his progress. He has a devouring power but you make him avoid war.

So all this time we've been waiting for is all for nothing huh? That's kinda let down,, Just posted in the chapter title when GOS is over,, I mean I already read og GOS and from this FF and it's boring to reading it again,, P.S. you should keep his meta-knowledge of GOS. He already read the novel before he reincarnated. It doesn't make sense you want to make him amnesiac all of a sudden,,

Its all good. The most important thing to take note of is. to make it refreshing and worth reading for those who’ve been waiting for so long. And remember to write the story YOU want to write, so your drive and imagination doesn’t get hindered by the big mouthed and whiny readers.

Welcome back dude and I liked new additions you add to mc's personality it feels more natural and mature

How stupid all that time wasted and all that waiting for a rewrite smh

Bro having him mentioned about having knowledge of this world and making him forget when he is a law being soul and also having strongest law is somewhat causing inconsistency bro

Dropped?

is this book dropped ???

Bro have you dropped if you haven't atleast give us some notification bro

dissapointed.. dude.. is this it? his a god already from the perspective of that world. amnesia.. you can do better than this man. you're becoming a let down.

I suggest you drop this part of the fanfic and make Leylin reincarnate in shadow slave as Sunny or a cousin of Nephis, where the magus in him tries to solve the profound mysteries surrounding the spell and the world

I'm honestly disappointed, I even found the previous arc interesting at first but over time it ended up getting tiring but it was less interesting to see what happened, but now that you've decided to start over so I won't have any more anxiety to know what happens next because I've already seen it before as it was, and honestly in that first chapter I noticed a huge difference in writing style, you are using a lot of thought lines unnecessarily it makes everything very boring

Uma dica já que você vai começar esse arco denovo, faz esse arco inteiro em poucos capítulos, só mostrando o essencial, faz ele em 3 pessoa só falando as coisas que aconteceu com o mc, e fazendo vários time skyp constantemente, até chegar a última parte que parou da última vez, e só aí continua a história normalmente, eu sou alguém que gostaria de ver essa história continuar porém não teria paciência para ver tudo denovo desse mundo, essa é minha dica e espero que você possa fazer ela

thanks for the chapter

TFTC! I enjoyed this new chp. Can't wait to see what changes u bring. I'll admit I was slowly getting bored as the previous GoS arc felt draggy. I do wonder why you made him lose meta knowledge of GoS though.

Dropped.

thanks for the chapter

I think...some memory of novel is good and no need to nerf or bottle his progres use ai and search more info to have better knight path \ martial create spell is good way to go...thanks you came back

I would so like him to get into the world Carefree way of dreams ...