Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

So we don't have a coin of destiny but something much better, a real seer at the service of Leylin. This is much better than the coin, if Lancy reaches the Morningstar rank, you will become an even more useful resource. With the prophetic visions of Lancy, Leylin can easily find new worlds and new resources.

Okay, I will accept Lancy becoming a seer. That is distinct enough to tickle my fancy.

It make sense to the story, but, idk, I just didn't get the feel of this arc... Like didn't do it himself make it feel weird. The event that happen between baelin and longbottom feel forced, or maybe leylin tells the whole twilight arc to lancy? idk. Didn't original Leylin make Baelin and Longbottom tale to gather destiny power? They aren't child of destiny originally. They became child of destiny just because leylin intervention. It could be anyone else, the conflict could be difference depend on intervention had done, more or less. it's just weird happen 11/12 like originals, well he got lancy rechargeable battery though. Sorry for bad grammar.

Awesome chapter. Thanks

Tank yu for the chapter. Hmmm, hmmm, gud. I accept this outcome.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ^^

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you author-sama for the chapter

should she have kept this coin of fate for the protagonist

thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters and can't wait to read your next chapters

mmm i've never liked this part. thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

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