Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

Kinda of a short chapter, left me wanting for more, like cocaine.

Very short, was expecting the entire fight to conclude in this chapter. Guess we'll have to wait for tomorrow.

author bro. I know it's being bitchy. but please increase chapter length. atleast end fights in one chap. other authors start a pat reon and make chapters smaller and drag out fights. don't do that. you have done an awesome novel and I love what you're doing. please don't shorten chaps.

Disappointing that the fight (which wasn't interesting )wasn't finished in this chapter. Frankly, I'm still in doubt about that technique he got... It does seems extremely lacking to be frank. A Magus Rank 1 Innate Spell does cost 1 (compared with the 10 it would cost if it wasn't a Innate Spell) while any Magus would have around at very least 20. It has been days and MC only has 3 drops of so called blood which makes very little sense. It was supposed to be something based in his own body and life-force but them its changed to his bloodline which is understandable but the efficiency of it is simple horrible and it its not clear if he is literally fucking his own bloodline or not when he uses it. Hopefully, it's a temporary thing as at Rank 4 when the bloodline is completely bound to a person soul the speed which it produces the Pure Blood should be based in both the body and soul.

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I will not even comment. To be honest, the chapters just suck, and so does the character of the girls.

Soo... if he burned his 'Bloodline Essence' does that mean he is permanently crippling his own Potential for a Short Term Boost? Or is it something that he gains back with time?

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

more more mooo.. huf hufff

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Thanks for the chapter

one of the best stories ever, needs more fanfiction!

Does power stone even bring any benefits to the author? Cause I was lazy voting so I thought it was a waste not using it

thnks

Thanks for the chapter

I need more chapters