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Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

Amon34
Amon34Lv11Amon34

Some paragraph felt like they were copy pasted

InHisName
InHisNameLv6InHisName

Anna has devoted herself for years to gain a slither of Leylin's affections. Bicky has offered nothing but her body, and even that only because she was hormonal thinking of her beloved. Yet, Leylin feels more for her than he feels for Anna?

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Isn't he is in far earlier timeline? Why does he still able to sit on that carriage? And why follow Canon when you could go elsewhere? I know she's pity, but you said that magus is a logic being... Hurm... Yeah, no.. Ignore me.. Its too late already.. Sigh... Here's some gif for fun..

SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3SageOfSins

still following canon...boring...

LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5LordInsanity

I like it that he doesn't ditch his people like canon however I hope he gains more abilities that are different from canon

MoonSon
MoonSonLv5MoonSon

I thought at least Nyssa would make a different decision

Juneurdark
JuneurdarkLv5Juneurdark

Entonces Nyssa murio porque yo recuerdo que en la novela original ella encontro algo de valor que le intereso a uno de la familia Lytell en su territorio estuvo a punto de morir pero Mc que estaba siendo afecto por la Blodine ataco y casualmente la salvo, a ella le dio el ansias por mas fuerza y un punto fulminante de ella. En esta linea de tiempo Mc no hara ese movimiento lo que conlleva que ella muera en esa situacion.

KiyotakaShiba
KiyotakaShibaLv4KiyotakaShiba

Thx for the chapter

Livergut
LivergutLv5Livergut

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Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3Venerabe_Yun

Thx for the chaps !!

Ulala_Ulala_0517
Ulala_Ulala_0517Lv3Ulala_Ulala_0517

man I hate this world, there are no good people everyone is either a raging psychopath or a raging psychopath. like all everyone does is make people slaves they don't have friends...even their own family is but a tool and object to use as a sacrifice what's the point of such a world? it doesn't make sense at all

Trek
TrekLv6Trek

Thanks for the chapter