ranmaro
Keep it up Mr author
First chapter, what im seeing which may turn most readers away is the large number of run ons(inappopriate placement of full stops and commas)
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thoroughly confused right now
I'm so confused right now ....what's happening ...
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Confusing
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good chapter so far
Exp
hey author chapter 1 is confusing like a lot
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Thanks for the chap