Comments of chapter undefined of [DONT READ ITS DROPPED]

Like I said Early Romance with Erza is good and I like the single paring but if u want to add Mira in future that cool just make it 1 or 2 max plus honestly looking at MC personality I don’t see him as harem type guy which is fine and I can tell he is definitely be loyal to Erza

Thanks for the chapter and don't worry, the Fight scene was well written.

Thanks for the chapter

Great chapter, excited for more!

Great chapter chap🧏🏿‍♂️

dont make a harem even if just 2 people your fic is good dont spoil it take your time make a harem fic in your futur fic train you first is the base of writing dont complicate your work more or you will drop your novel i know what i mean it dit happen to a lot of fic of beginer writer who were trying to hard but droped after 20 or less chapter so please stop making romance with one person is super super hard and you want to add an another one in your first fic ? please stop its a really good fic

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Love chapter and I like the ending MC goes on mission with Erza and trains too and when they get back his magic power should be at Laxus lvl and his spirit power should be close to Guildarts and Third Master

Tell me if you found grammar mistakes. Also, I need your feedback on the fight. I am still a newbie so I don't know if it was "good" written.

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I really like this so far. But sometimes I think that his powers other than his ice king ones are uncessasary. You can make it so that when he develops his Ice emperor powers to the peak, he can become a powerhouse. These other powers and the system is kind of useless imo. It can also be difficult to explain how he gets these powers. Well those are just my thoughts, keep it up!

Wait. I am completely lost... who da f*ck dies in Fairy Tail?! I don t remember a single person (Ultear?)