Chaosking
To the author: please do whatever you want. There will always be people who'll like it and some who will not. I don't want you to get discouraged while reading comments and stuff. For I've seen many authors abandoning their work.. even writing for that matter. Many have fallen in trap of listening to their readers and making constant changes to their novel and realise how it's no longer their own original work. No-one told you to write this novel, you did it yourself. So, why listen to them telling you how and what to write. Obviously, it's your choice to listen what, when and from whom. But know that this is your story and no-one knows it better than you. Whatever you write I'll be fine with it. I've never seen you asking for votes and reviews. Nor is anyone paying for it. You wrote this novel out of boredom, to please yourself not others. And if it doesn't please you, why bother? Mental health should always be a priority. Hope your exams went well. Be healthy and take it easy. Have fun. Lemme know if I could be of any help to you even if it's monetary. Since I've dug this up already, to those who got butthurt cause of netori: wasn't it very clear in the third chapter when the system literally announced main quest: 'take all the girls away from the main protagonist' (keyword here is 'all' as in it might happen a few times.) You went into this novel knowing it's a netori and now that it barely happens, you.. I want be more vocal but I'm afraid that this might affect this novel and so the author.. I'll stop here. (**: I started reading this yesterday.)
the beauty of every novel is the originality .which can never be duplicate ..this is your story "Author " and you already envisioned how it's going to end.. and that is something we the readers can never see/ or do.. stick to your story and the comments are mainly there to guide you into becoming a better writer...
Even though Im late I want to say that if you're a degenerate and already wrote the story as one, you should just keep it as is. No point in changing it, at least if popularity isnt your first priority. Now about the story, I feel kinda bad from the point of view where he exploits other characters emotionally, but from another standpoint he saves them from painful experiences like he did with the maid and the 2 beastgirls. The 3 of them would suffer horrible things but thanks to him they wont, BUT I still feel kinda bad from exploiting them at their lowest.