Comments of chapter undefined of I Can Extract Everything
I Can Extract Everything
Mysterious_Pen
Chapter comments4
You have superb ideas for novels, take system for an example, the extraction function is an superb idea. I think you’re just confused and had lot of things in the mind, the story was going greatly but in recent chapters it become a fillers. There is no suspense and thriller, in recent chapters. Let me give you my honest opinion in pros and cons! Pro: 1. The Extraction System 2. MC has planning everthing in safer side and doesn’t want to provoke or offend others openly. 3. No harem or faceslapping or Unwanted killing. The Silence of Life is great, you should write according to that tag. 4. The Colleter Identity. Cons: 1. Clones, i just thing clones are making mc lazy as he has void jump. I personally hate the interaction with clones. I just thing mc is not suitable to have this mystic talent. 2. Lack of fights and Suspenses. 3. After mc leaving the sect, the story goes downhill. 4. Lack of intractions with others and no named characters. The assissan is okay but need more. 5. I just thing mc meeting his sibiIngs could have done better, i think its forced. 6. Maybe you can bring a female lead or love interest.
I love the story. You have a great concept and I like the storyline. I agree that the collector identity is great. I also love all the misunderstanding. They are so funny. The cons would be the clones. But mostly because I find them overpowering when you had limitations on the system to keep the character balanced. I read the previous chapters before you remade the story so I know you probably don't want to rewrite it just for that. But I would suggest making a discovery of a weakness the clones have l, like possibly a time limit and having to remake them or that they have to be in contact with the original every once and a while. Up to you. I as a reader would also like to see a goal for the mc. We know he is a reincarnation. But we don't know his passed. So we don't know what motivates him. Is he materialistic and wants to collect rare items or pets. Does he want to live forever, or build a supreme sect or maybe find out more about the system? Last suggestion is I would also like a villain or antagonist. But otherwise I enjoy the story some fight scenes would be nice but take it at your own pase. Oh and I agree with No Haren please I wouldn't mind a love interest but honestly not big on it. But I'll still read on no matter what. Keep it up. 👍
