Comments of chapter undefined of How I Became the Strongest Sovereign

So, to avoid cheating as a reader, I didn't read the introduction to your world. Why ? because a novel must be self explanatory, and doesn't get 'defined' like a roleplay would. The purpose of this exercice if for me to understand the elements you stated above without having to revert to the explanations. This will show that you've been providing the reader with everything he needs to navigate your world. I've read the intro, though, so I've got a few info stored: the monarchs, their competition coming, the fact that they are god like beings and that humans exist. And I'm going to the next chapter !

wow nice intro! definitely exciting!

Wow an interesting world!

nice chapter

Beautifully explained and precise. Easy to understand and not overly complicated, brilliant first chapter Mr Author

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hmm interesting start. comes here since you said hes somewhat op

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The start of a great novel.......maybe lets see!!!🤷‍♂️

A friend recommended this, i haven't had the time to start but im starting today! I absolutely loved the first chapter and the world description here. Onto the next chapter 🧘🏽‍♀️

amazing first chapter

That's a very good intro

AYE YES LET'S BEGIN! :D INTERESTING PREMISE HEHE

The story is super interesting let me continue🔥

Mr Casanova has just started, a few grammar mistakes but you had just started at that time so yeah 🤷‍♂️