TofSpades
So, to avoid cheating as a reader, I didn't read the introduction to your world. Why ? because a novel must be self explanatory, and doesn't get 'defined' like a roleplay would. The purpose of this exercice if for me to understand the elements you stated above without having to revert to the explanations. This will show that you've been providing the reader with everything he needs to navigate your world. I've read the intro, though, so I've got a few info stored: the monarchs, their competition coming, the fact that they are god like beings and that humans exist. And I'm going to the next chapter !