Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and The Descendant of Merlin

I like the chapter, but you may want to make a change. I think the coins generally go into a pouch, but all the materials, the books, etc should go into a chest. He could go into the store where they would give him a chest with various enchantments on it, including shrinking down to something he could wear on a necklace.

Are we going by the books or the movies because I’m a little confused also btw I think this a typo but you said that newt’s book would not be released until 2001 it was one of Harry’s first year books and when I went to the wiki it said has been released since 1927 I know it’s a small minor detail but it’s a plot hole so yeah keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter

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He should have definitely have someone else do it. As talented as he is, he's still total noob.

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Errr? Wrong, First years aren't allowed their own brooms in HOGWARTS. Nothing says they're not allowed to buy their own broom. It would be one of the dumbest sales tactics ever ...

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Thanks for the chapter author San 😀 please keep up the good work 😀

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