Comments of chapter undefined of Embers Ver.II

So. Just to let you know, I wanted to have the experience of a reader without 'cheating'. Meaning I didn't read the character introduction, and decided to rely on whatever information you will give us in the text. Which, so far, is being great. I just have some trouble with the conversation with the hologram where I didn't quite know who was speaking to whom and who was thinking what. But other wise, you really master your craft there :)