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They are still young so I would wait until at least Shippuden years for any romance.... just have the world building and character development because this will change the story completely since zabuza/haku are alive. Team7 are stronger than cannon but naruto never had that fight with haku which helped his character & showed narutos kyubi chakra.... curious to see how these things will change the story!
To be honest, the thing I am enjoying the most in this novel as of this moment is Kakashi. You have done him justice. His Character Justice. His speech patterns justice. Like wow man. I absolutely adore their relationship. This is what a teacher-student relationship is supposed to be like. The student can rely on his teacher. I hope you keep developing this. Cuz logically, Kakashi is the only character that has been everything and loyal to Sasuke. Helped him out, is mentoring him and even was there for him when he broke down. I hope you don’t forget Kakashi in the 3 year gap. I wanna see him develop as well as a result of the SI influence on him. Maybe he got determined to get stronger as he didn’t want his students to surpass him so easily. Or something. Also, can you make it that Sasuke becomes his apprentice in the 3 years gap. For Kakashi knows a lot. And Sasuke can benefit from it immensely. Let me know what you thinking. Loving this so far. Also, I have commented on the previous chapter my concerns about Harem. And how they can interfere with the MC’s vision. Please reply. I wanna know your, the author’s thoughts on it.
Don't rely on others regarding the route of this fanfic. You have to think about it yourself. Just a reminder, fanfiction harem are not a great reference. Take it from me who became addicted to anime/manga/LN by watching/reading harem stories, became a harem hater when he started reading fanfiction.
You tell the Mr. Author... My comment was just a suggestion, you may or may not follow... Truth to be told, I only want more chappy from you cuz for me more is good.... At the same time, its your story so don't care about how people think... Just care about what you want to write... To be honest you are doing just fine to me so keep it up...
A relationshIp that challenegss sasuke and improves his personal growth whether harem or not will helo the story. someone like anko where he vows to kill orochimaru and help anko and learn posions and snake summons from her. Or even someone like Mei where he goes to the mist and helps in rebellion and as a result falls for the mature beauty that is mei. or even someone like ino where she goes into sasukes mind and finds out about his trauma and resolves to help him or sakura where she and him grow into competent shinobi. have tsuande teach them both and solve senju uvhiha rivalry and expose orochi, danzo and 3rd hokages schemes against her the senjus and uchihas when shes 5th hokage.have you and her oust the council and out in aleeper cells in the daimyos council and try to encourage trade and peace. when 5 shinibu war cones you can use orochimarus research and chakra fruits and dna of uzimaki and senju to give him rinnegan and eternal life. maybe increase tsunsade life span and return her health. rhe romances should be weaved into the story and unexpected.
If done without a harem, then the most beautiful women are Nii Yugito, Mei Terumi, Konan, Nagato (huh just kidding), Samui, Ino - and in character and in appearance they are the top, you can even add Kaguyu for fun. (I could have missed someone, I don't remember everyone). You can also think about Hinata (however, after you portrayed her as a complete pervert - 50/50). Well, if, in the end, without a harem. Never add Karin or Sakura to romance. In fact, they are both the same, bitches, hysterics and flat, Sakura at least has a cool face and ass, Karin doesn't even have that. As rude as it sounds, Karin is a first aid kit on her feet, no more, no less. (blame everything on Kishimoto) ((((((
Why are there so many vulnerable idiots in the chat who cry for some strange reason. The author did everything right, and it should be so. If Sasuke became the main character's love interest, it would be extremely disappointing. How infuriated me are the stories where they take characters from different fanfiction and all