Comments of chapter undefined of My life as Sasuke
My life as Sasuke
NahinS77
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I still stand by my opinion. Just focus on the story, sasuke's character development, his development as a ninja, his training, his daily life, his hobby, his thoughts, his preparation for the war, preparation for the other otsutsuki, he also needs to think of a solution for Kara, the fight scene etc. You already confirmed that you are gonna take Karin as the partner of Sasuke. So you gonna have to think of a way to include her in the story also, her character development, her development as a ninja, how she is different from her original self because of sasuke's influence . From the logical perspective of your story it cannot handle harem. It's already hard for you to add the fight scenes in the story, you also need to at least keep your story quality from dropping, then you need to add the character development of sasuke, karin and other relevant character, their growth as ninja etc, how the war will be different, the after effect of it, the butterfly effect etc . There's also the romance scene. It's already so hard for you, don't make things harder for you and make your story quality drop, or else your story will devolves into the basic fanfiction or shit quality smut that teenagers use to beat their meat. I already stated my reason why it wont work with hinata or hanabi. It also won't with temari if i use the politics excuse. Konoha won't let the uchiha or senju bloodline be married to a outsider especially someone from the kazekage bloodline. Why would they give the opportunity to have the uchiha bloodline to outsider? it's okay if it's temari and shikamaru coz it won't be a threat or a security risk, they also got to tie temari to one of their major and trusted clan and temari or sand won't be able to plot anything against the nara clan. Ino and sasuke will also not work coz ino is a clan heiress, her clan and she know that she can't marry people that have a higher standing than her or anyone with bloodline like sasuke . They need Ino to be the leader and control and lead the clan her original husband Sai is a perfect due to this. Because their clan interest doesn't clash with sai and sai is not someone who will threaten or weaken ino's standing. If she marries sasuke it'll be hard to prove herself also coz people will label her as sasuke uchiha's wife. no more no less. I don't think sakura fits this sasuke, even if she changes, throw her to kiba or someone else. She's also Tsunade's disciple and the number one medic and strongest kunoichi after the war. If she train more she can also use more genjutsu and ninjutsu in her fighting style. I recommend sasuke to leave with orochimaru coz he will not be restricted like when he is in konoha and the things he can learn from orochimaru is so much better than what konoha can offer. He can also get to know and fall in love with karin while training with orochimaru or after . You should guarantee orochimaru to be a good person like in boruto or during the 4th great ninja war . The catalyst is Kabuto, watching kabuto achieved what he wanted and his mistakes and sasuke searching for his own path is what makes orochimaru turned neutral if i remember correctly. Orochimaru will he a valuable ally in boruto's plot.
Harem is fine just the CRA ( Clan Restoration Act) as an excuse, but dont put sakura or ibo in their , Try to make it realistic (as realistic as a harem can get lol) and make caracter improvements regarding their relationship for example Temari with the political marriage. Dont just make her be like fine I accept well that also depends how their first interaction will go and her opinion of him . But I enjoy your story so far and can see it becoming a great fanfic, so keep it up
Okay. Listen. Those are the girls I can put is it is Harem. If harem I am not putting any other girls. It is already hard for me to make it Harem. Even I don't like the canon Sakura. That's why I am going to change her. Sakura will not be useless if she is in the harem. I am having hard time on if I should put Hinata on it or not. I mean... Forget it if you like reply under. Lastly if no harem then only Karin. Because she deserves it. In my opinion. Ask me if you need any answers.
Honestly i think you shouldnt pick sakura, not because shes useless but because she doesnt really develop like the other characters do Temari and hanabi for political stuff would be good, Ino and karin for emtional stuff and maybe a girl from Kumo SaSuke is legit the last of his clan so each billage would want a peace of that action and would send a delegate
Sakura IF you devolpe her, aside from that the hyuuga and uchiha never got along. While you could make sasuke work with hinata, i just don't see why he would invest in devolping her confidence, and hanabi is too young. Ino, can possibly be accepted but once again she always seemed to use the rivalry as a means to push sakura, at least that is what the original intent seemed to be (we all remember the most pathetic battle after forest of death :p) Karin is an excellent choice, especially since she actually participated in the Chuunin exam and bringing her to the attention of the hokage would set a good foundation for her feelings (just don't forget that she was never truly taught much at this point, and is used a disposable healing tool) Temari could work, not just due to the political stuff but because she would not be put off by your MC as opossed to mr emo edge lord from canon.
Harem is a viable option but only if you do intend for him to have children in this world. The character has been shown to dislike this world which is logical. Honestly, the naruto world in hindsight is a horrifying place. Basically, make it a harem if you intend for him to fall in love and live here. Make it Karin otherwise, he can easily gain her loyalty and can leave the world without anything of value lost. Having a harem, will tie him down to the village depending on who you choose. All the girls from Konoha are bad options. Maybe Sakura but I don’t yet understand where you intend to take her. Also, the girls will always choose to remain in this world. Other than Karin for she has been used by shinobi her whole life. She wouldn’t miss it.