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Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi - Card Wizard

ExaizT
ExaizTLv11ExaizT

Thanks for letting us know

The_Nameless_One81
The_Nameless_One81Lv3The_Nameless_One81

Look man, it's just my opinion but I think you should just skip to canon. At least in canon, you will have an idea about what to write instead of just thinking about random daily life stuff...

Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv1Gabriel_Menard

Take care, there are no problem. I m happy that this story is not dropped

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4ArdaPendragon

Take care, I hope you keep writing.

Delema
DelemaLv1Delema

I think a break of 4 months was enough, it's time to release a new chapter.

Superthinkred
SuperthinkredLv14Superthinkred

dropped? i guess

Alex_Bull_Leandro
Alex_Bull_LeandroLv4Alex_Bull_Leandro

then just make a temporary jump and summarize the most important thing that has happened and that aiz and the mc already have a relationship please 🙏 MCxAIZ

Delema
DelemaLv1Delema

Well, it turns out the ff was abandoned. Thank you for a little bit of interesting history, it was nice to meet you and etc. Bye bye.

Fredjf
FredjfLv13Fredjf

Been a while, you gonna pick this up again?

Demiwizard202
Demiwizard202Lv4Demiwizard202

I miss this story Sad to see it go

Choi_Nugiasmara
Choi_NugiasmaraLv2Choi_Nugiasmara

Next chapter please

Dev_Wat
Dev_WatLv1Dev_Wat

Well, I don't know if you thought of this, but you could add them being on the other side of Loki family recruitment day, and have them help out, especially since the 2 Amozon girls are there, maybe even Bete, if he join during this timeframe? Then have them help train new recruits, along with Finn and Elf and Dawrf, have them help more against Evulis group, etc. Also, if you haven't done this already, then I suggest creating a notebook in IRl, or something on your computer or phone, the list every Magic Card idea used in the fic so far, along with the abilities that affect Aiden Magic Card, in one section. Then every Magic Card idea you created, but haven't used in the fic yet, in a different section, then for the 3rd section, you can create a new page or chapter in this fic, and have us, your readers, suggest or create new Magic Card ideas, in which you can consider at your own leisure. And if you do accept the said card of choice, give a shout-out the person who came up with it, something like this would no doubt turn into a competition, on who will be given a shout-out during this opportunity during the story, and who will be next. Hopefully, this will help you, and make it fun for you and your readers. With that being said, I suggest reading if you haven't already: "Playing with the supernatural" on Webnovel, Kisuke and Yoruichi from Bleach are the Main Characters, in Highschool DXD, and them some how crossing over to Danmachi. And there are a lot of good ideas, and new take on how the Danmachi System works, maybe you might consider asking the Author, if you can use some of their ideas, or something, or maybe even come up with your own.

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4ArdaPendragon

Dropped?

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

I miss this story

Lags_xcross
Lags_xcrossLv4Lags_xcross

next chapter please

Samantha_Goldberg_8690
Samantha_Goldberg_8690Lv4Samantha_Goldberg_8690

Please update

Abyss_lake_Guily
Abyss_lake_GuilyLv1Abyss_lake_Guily

this was very interesting, thank you very much, between ups and downs, cliches and more cliches, your story is one of the best ff I've seen from danmach

Pilgrim_Reaper
Pilgrim_ReaperLv4Pilgrim_Reaper

When are you going to release the next chapter author-kun?????

paul_allen
paul_allenLv14paul_allen

1 of my fav fics in general and uncontested danmachi favourite. like the OC and his magic. like The OC x Ais thing going on. hope u update soon and if u don't I hope ur fav fic stops updating to.[img=update]

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

im so waiting for more.. love the relationship already between mc and ais

Jay1_
Jay1_Lv14Jay1_

honestly write what you want im just along for the ride