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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat8mth
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    Somewhat, but she won't be alone in doing so, but she will develop feelings of extremely despise them, same with others in Athena familia.

    Ch 72 Chapter 64: Teasing The New Couple
    Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat8mth
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    Are you alright?, It's been 3 months, and no update so far, do note, that I've only read this fic so far, the others are next, but with that being said. You haven't updated once a week, if you are still stockpiling chapters and ideas, then that's fine, let's talk about something else, whatever that you want, whether it's about Fic's, Anime, Games, Manga, Movie, or Questions, we don't mind one bit, just have fun.

    Ch 71 Update
    BNHA: Martial Arts God
    Anime & Comics · Damaine_N
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat8mth
    Commented

    I don't know if I'm late or not, but you should consider giving the Crow a name, and Gender.

    Ch 12 Chapter 12. No title
    Demon Slayer: Sea Hashira
    Anime & Comics · Blood_Dao_
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat8mth
    Commented

    By the way, the song: Ship in a Bottle Animatic, it fits well with this chapter, in my opinion anyways.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3. Birth and childhood 2
    Demon Slayer: Sea Hashira
    Anime & Comics · Blood_Dao_
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat8mth
    Replied to selfinsert

    Wouldn't it be the Wrath of the Sea God, if he does learn it?

    Ch 3 Chapter 3. Birth and childhood 2
    Demon Slayer: Sea Hashira
    Anime & Comics · Blood_Dao_
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    Well, I don't know if you thought of this, but you could add them being on the other side of Loki family recruitment day, and have them help out, especially since the 2 Amozon girls are there, maybe even Bete, if he join during this timeframe? Then have them help train new recruits, along with Finn and Elf and Dawrf, have them help more against Evulis group, etc. Also, if you haven't done this already, then I suggest creating a notebook in IRl, or something on your computer or phone, the list every Magic Card idea used in the fic so far, along with the abilities that affect Aiden Magic Card, in one section. Then every Magic Card idea you created, but haven't used in the fic yet, in a different section, then for the 3rd section, you can create a new page or chapter in this fic, and have us, your readers, suggest or create new Magic Card ideas, in which you can consider at your own leisure. And if you do accept the said card of choice, give a shout-out the person who came up with it, something like this would no doubt turn into a competition, on who will be given a shout-out during this opportunity during the story, and who will be next. Hopefully, this will help you, and make it fun for you and your readers. With that being said, I suggest reading if you haven't already: "Playing with the supernatural" on Webnovel, Kisuke and Yoruichi from Bleach are the Main Characters, in Highschool DXD, and them some how crossing over to Danmachi. And there are a lot of good ideas, and new take on how the Danmachi System works, maybe you might consider asking the Author, if you can use some of their ideas, or something, or maybe even come up with your own.

    Ch 62 Info
    Danmachi - Card Wizard
    Anime & Comics · Shireneko
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    For Hermione, I read the many comments, and some of them aren't bad, like the one about Hermione being the to research and etc. In my opinion, you should just add her into the story, and then see where it goes, while toying with ideas on what she will do or think, and how she interact with the other characters, how her personality could change, and if you think it's worth it, then maybe she can join the harem.

    Ch 88 Hermione Granger
    Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Crazy_Penguin
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    Add Haku. As for Izumi, well, here's a idea, and it comes from read Female Itachi fics. You could make so that Fugaku trains Fem Itachi as a Man, or use Genjutsu or Seals, because Fugaku wanted a son for a Heir, before he say screw it, and just disowned both Mikoto and Itachi. Or, after finishing with his undercover work, Naruto decided to bring Itachi back home, but realized he couldn't just do that, and after some consideration, came up with a plan, Itachi will die, (a clone or something), while Itachi himself will have to change, after all can't go around looking like a dead man, and if he's not male, then that will further reduce being recognized as Itachi, (after all, who would have expected Itachi as a female.), And change Itachi female looks a bit more, so he doesn't look like a female version of himself, Itachi will change her name to Izumi, in honor of his past love, and if need be, a different last name. And besides, with how much He been pump into Itachi, I doubt Itachi will decline the idea, after all, all who's been infected with Naruto GS, will follow Naruto orders without question, since they are devoted followers of Naruto. Although, if you do decide to go down the route of Turing male Itachi into female Itachi, then you have a choice of Jutsu or Seals, or placing Itachi soul into a female body, or etc.

    Ch 21 Here I come cannonnnn!
    Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Crazy_Penguin
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    Hmm....., I've always had a idea, but first, let me get started on pointing out Konoha Police Force, otherwise known as the Uchiha Police Force. Ever since they been wipeout in Canon, I didn't see or hear about a police force in Konoha, (as far as I remember, I could be wrong.), And I have yet too notice any mention of a police force in Konoha in this fix. I read this in a fix somewhere, but I don't remember where, in any case, in KPF, you could add in members from the other Clans of Konoha, Retired Shinobi that's looking for work, and non clan shinobi's, with some in the KPF being experts on interrogation. (obviously the KPF can't torture people, and Konoha already have a Intterrorgation and torture department, so unless it's necessary, the KPF won't torture, besides, KPF is only there to help the citizens of Konoha, like stopping a drunken brawl, catching a thief, etc.) And here's the Root Idea, it's basically the Anbu version of the KPF, (and they don't need to wait for a search warrant.), but deals with in house problems, so they aren't sent on missions, instead, their job's is to invade Privatecy of the people or anyone really, but to be so stealthy about it, that no one knows they are doing so, especially during the Chuuni Exams, without causing a international or dimplomatic incidents. And they routinely gather information on every one in Konoha, in case of anyone planning to attack Konoha, if anyone is betraying Konoha, (like for example, a council member is found out selling information on Konoha to outside party, just so they line their pockets with money, or a Corupt Council member in general.) Basically, Root deals with domestic affairs in Konoha, while Anbu deals with domestic affairs in the Land of Fire, and all the other stuffs they do, Konoha no doubt have a Black Ops Division, that operate like Donzo Root Division, that causes problems in other countries and etc.

    Ch 30 Is this the end of the novel?
    Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Crazy_Penguin
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    You have no idea how bad it gets with Sacred Gears, especially with LSG, here's a small sample of it. Webnovel Annihilation Maker DxD by Soul_Caliber

    Ch 517 Gremory VS Bael
    Playing with other Supernaturals
    Anime & Comics · Goyya
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat1yr
    Commented

    Not a bad idea, eating 2 Wyvern Hearts and Dragon Hearts, thus increasing ones own MP Limit. However, I have learned quite a few things, from reading many fanfiction's, here's one of them: Webnovel: Annihilation Maker DXD by Soul_Caliber, pg. 24: True Power. You can read about it, during Leo fight with Dr. Stylish And another thing, everyone knows that getting the 3 Regen's: Health, Magic, Stamina, is priority, (take the Dark Souls and Borderlands series for example, heck, even SAO during the part where Kirito help Silica, and then fights a bunch of red players.). This means you waste less money on constantly buying potions, when you can simply regenerate your health/magic/stamina. Thus saving the potions for emergency during battles only, otherwise, one can take their own time to rest, before going into the next battle at full Health/Magic/Stamina. Of course, if one could also get Battle Regen, (which is Regeneration that works during battle.), that would also help out in the long run. With that being said, I don't know how the MC be able to get a Regen for Health and Stamina, but for Magic, the Meditation skill usually helps in getting Magic Regen, and maybe health regen. Now then, there are 2 things that makes up Regen, the # and Timer, now for a example. If we take the MC base MP #, which was a 1000, and the MC could Regen 100 MP every 10 or so Minutes, once the MC use said Meditation skill, (which only works out of combat.) And the MC could level up the skill, the question becomes, when the skill is level up, will it affect both # & Timer, or will the MC be only able to level up only 1 side of the skill. Because in my opinion, sure having higher numbers will help, but If I have too wait for every 10 or so minutes, then that means wasting 10 or so minutes in doing other stuff's, just to Regen 100 MP. (which if you add all the time up, to Regen full MP, which is a 1000, and the Regen is a 100 MP every 10 Min, that'll be 100 Minutes, or 1 hr and 40 minutes, to Regen full MP), especially if there are dangerous things around. So I would upgrade the Timer, instead of the #, and try and lower the Minutes into the seconds, especially if you can lower it all the way to 1 or 5 seconds, that'll be 100 MP every 1 or 5 seconds. much faster and better, especially since the MP is the MC Ammo, therefore, the MC needs the MP too shoot, and he will need it fast, with that being said, until the MC does get the Timer down to the seconds. He will need to secure a safe area and hide, thus the MC should look into getting the Stealth skill, and let the TImer for his Regen get to work. As for Magic Bullets, there's tons of idea's, if the MC can create his own Magic Bullets, but that'll be on a different comment. And don't say it's impossible for the MC to think of said ideas, and experiment with to see them actually working or not, he came from a world where Anime, Manga, Games, Movies, Books, Video Games, fanfiction, etc., existed in his life, thus he have too have some ideas he could try out. Especially having a idea on how to build Classes, like in Dark Souls and etc., therefore, having a idea for getting MP Regen.

    Ch 50 Chapter 45: A Way to increase one's MP
    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    Which type of Long Sword? there's the western type, basically what Knight Swords look like. then there's the Eastern type, basically what Japan/Samurai Swords look like. If you can comment a Link to which Sword Type, I think we can figure out the color scheme on our own, maybe.

    Ch 1 Ch.1 Orario
    Danmachi - Card Wizard
    Anime & Comics · Shireneko
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Replied to Dev_Wat

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    Ch 26 Update
    Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · TheMostAbstract
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    Good luck.

    Ch 7 Read this.
    A Surgeon in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · Sadrad
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    So, that's what it means to die beautifully, I think I'm starting to understand, ....., and I don't know if that scares me or not.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    A Surgeon in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · Sadrad
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Replied to Dev_Wat

    The way you used Golden Experience, it was amazing. I recall durning the UA Sport Festival 1v1, that the MC created something similar to a Jujutsu Kaisen Domain Expansion using Golden Experience. It was a Jungle with animals, insects, plants, etc., being created & control, and you can easily imagine what happens in that scenario. And in another fic on Webnovel is Annihilation Maker DXD by Soul_Caliber, which is a funny fic, enjoy the chaos, it feeds us. And on Fanfiction, The Requiem of Remnant by The Black Mage of Phantasm, we have the Main User of The One And Only Golden Experience, from JoJo itself, Giorno Giovana, being transported to RWBY verse, which force Giorno Giovana to use his abilities wisely, and in new ways. Why I mention all of this, it's because I want to see if this will inspire you, get your Creative Spark lit up, so enjoy.

    Ch 1 so yeah, hello again
    e20
    Anime & Comics · Blur182
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    I really like how you did Golden Experienc in the fic, I have yet to read any fics, that did the things you did with Golden Experienc. If there are such fics, please let me know, it's hard to find a good Golden Experienc fic.

    Ch 1 so yeah, hello again
    e20
    Anime & Comics · Blur182
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    Leo needs to start using his Annihilation Maker, and start making Anti Beasts, and create tons for Gacha Devil or whatever title she has. Especially start recreating the SCP's to help him out, and some more Pokemon & Digimon, and maybe others. Like for example, recreating other MC's as his Beasts, like the MC from the: I have been reincarnated as a Slime, and others like that.

    Ch 117 Back.
    Annihilation Maker DXD
    Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Commented

    Hey, since Shirou is alive, have him train against Doll Kirito, it would be interesting, you can have Doll Kirito say quotes and etc., as Shirou gets beaten by Doll Kirito.

    Ch 92 Weird.
    Annihilation Maker DXD
    Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber
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  • Dev_Wat
    Dev_Wat2yr
    Replied to Soul_Caliber

    That, and a little bit of Leo Teasing, Trolling, Pranking, Bullying, etc., in good moderation, as long it isn't taken to far.

    Ch 60 The Ultimate Plan.
    Annihilation Maker DXD
    Anime & Comics · Soul_Caliber
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