Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi - Card Wizard

I like how this is going and that they are slowly trusting each other more and I bet when Canon starts The duo would just have awesome teamwork that just awe who watches them and Nice Chapter Author

maybe after hitting the 18th floor I will do a timeskip

I really like this chapter, it shows how Ais feels about the MC and closer they become and there feeling for each other will definitely continue to grow in future and become something more and Ais now has new goal to become stronger not only too kill one eye dragon and save her mom but also to protect MC and it’s same with MC after that incident he wants to get stronger so he can protect Ais and Ais knows that in her heart the MC is her Hero

the start of a kuudere/yandere

it would be interesting for their abilities to evolve with the bond, giving telepathy and feeling the partner's location and state of health

I really love the character interactions in this fanfic they feel so real please keep up the great work author-san👍👍👍

there's just one problem with this story..... it doesn't have enough chapters!!

a bit rough arround the edges but a decent chap overall. Next time you do a pov like this try using less I's in every para or just write in third pov.

Can't help falling in live with you~❤️ -Aiz

I absolutely Love Ais POV and she really doesn't seem to Like the old hag much in the beginning but that is normal. Thanks for the chapter.

To make it more exciting, maybe the author needs to add family feuds or other familia members. Or maybe add some drama spice

Good good, very good more like this

Ais is really sweet~ Thanks for the chapter! (^ w ^)/

Thanks for the chapter

I like the story so far, but for me personally that chapter was more difficult to read than necessary. Maybe because you used “I” in every sentence? I think first pov sounds a lot better if you try to minimize that one, it isn’t really necessary. Aside from that you are writing pretty well so far and the pacing seems fitting.

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“Old Hag” hahahhahaha!!!

Mr. or Mrs. writer, when will you update this great story, seriously, this story is great