Comments of chapter undefined of Downfall Of The Kings

Excellent choice of words n a lovely display of professionalism in your writing, loved it!

I’m not ready. oh my gosh your writing is so poetic and amazingly structured. An amazing opening to what is probably going to be an amazing story.

If only we had enemy pov

Great

Brilliant !

I have never been so drawn in like this. Hats off to you! 👏 I was trying so hard to blow this up but when the story just flows so well its really hard for me to stop and comment😅😩 yea im here for this and im not ashamed! 🖤

Gotta agree that I never expected such powerful imagery in a ML book.

Hi, I just wanted to say that I love the cliffhanger and that I really do love this story!

That was an EXCELLENT first chapter!

whoa man that was so deep and extremely imaginary story I was soo focus on this nothing could distract me man u are awesome author keep it up

How come the people he trusted the most, didn't know about the sword hilt, and the skills? curious! curious! curious!

A well-done first chapter. Hope the rest are just as amazing.

Wow!

nice!

Interesting start 😊

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it's a replica of "kill the hero"

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon