Your problem, my friend, is that you ignored the bad experience that the main character went through, as he was supposed to be less willing to help others, but you made him very excited to go and start a fight with the church just because of a strange girl.[img=faceslap]

He makes a disagreement with others for no reason with the constant repetition that he wants to stay hidden

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

You gave a fan for you now

Wonderful

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Giving his cultivation technique to others is the first downfall of this novel's villain

You just take my live and share it here

The auther die or what,,[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Your novel up to chapter 21 is so good that if I could just throw you into a room with a computer and lock the door on you and get you to finish it, I'd do it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Amazing

Good jop

Oh[img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's the author's number one mistake. Why would someone so disgusted with the task still waste time teaching them and getting their opinion when he could only order them?

You broke my heart every day I come to see your novel and I can't find an update

Sounds like a stupid story[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I see good novel front me [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]