Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Monarch

I'll be honest, I was invested and interested in the story, even after the confusing and (up until now), pointless prologue. The moment you started changing POV between the two girls, seemingly side characters and the even less important other characters (which we still don't know how they matter) I just lost any connection to the story and the MC. The continuity was cut off, I lost track of whats happening, the chronological order of the fight between the girls and that beast was completely messed up. I think we read about that beast dying at least twice. Unfortunately you went with the moron MC, something I will never understand. Sitting on a treasure of knowledge and made little to no attempt to gain it. You made him smart enough to avoid the books at first in the library, the artifacts that could be dangerous, but then you made him cast a magical spell (his first), in a library that could be worth more than a continent (a fact he was aware off), it felt like you dialed back his intelligence to drive the plot of getting pushed out of the library. You then failed to make him appear smart by trying to get in the library again, instead you made him appear pathetic by practically crying because he tried the library door and it was locked and then he just...walked a way. He didn't try any other way to get in the library (like re-creating the process of walking the room or anything else). To be clear, the point is not him getting into the library but being smart enough to understand its importance and try. Personally, every step he took further from that library just told me, this novel is not for me. Also, having him do stupid things, which according him is unusual, with the only reasoning being: I am not sure I am doing this (like walking into a forest) is such a poor choice, it is basically admitting the author is moving the character rather than writing about it. I was disappointed overall, obviously, and I wouldn't bother writing it if I didn't feel it could be better. Maybe Ill read a novel from you, one day, is a competent MC.

Great chapter again!

Story seems quite interesting, but mc is VERY infuriating.

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