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When the group of warriors fighting in enemy territory they are not talking. At most they giving signs to one another. This group looks like bunch of children playing an RPG game.
Lol, you're looking for realism in a fantasy book. It's okay if you think this is for children. There's no need to force yourself to read it. Thanks for your input
Vladislav_Romanov:Yes i was. I am living in war. I am from Israel. That is why i am writing this comment because i know what i am talking about. And if you are talking about the fantasy world. The people should show proper behavior for the person they are claiming to be. For example the assasins veteran should work quiet and plan and kill with one hit. Veteran warriors should plan and work in teams like special operations. Quiet and effective. Generals should know tactics, strategy and logistic staff e.t.c. They are all humans and should behave the same way as humans on the Earth. If they not it should be clarified that they are differnt from us and in what specifically. Or just mentioned that the book is written for children and all in it starting from the world and ending by persons behaviours are childish and unreal.