When the group of warriors fighting in enemy territory they are not talking. At most they giving signs to one another. This group looks like bunch of children playing an RPG game.
Hey?
I'm participating in Male Lead Demons as well.
But how many words is this prelude ?
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So far this is really good. The wording and for is great and I really like how the first few paragraphs set the scene. I could actually picture the mountains and Castle in my head from the descriptions. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.