Comments of chapter undefined of The Goblin's Leveling System!

great start, it has potential keep it up bro. if you to give him a an ability, you should him these. Efficient Body: User has a body/bodily systems that are totally efficient, with absolutely no wasted energy or effort on their part. This allows them to make best use of their body/bodily systems, including metabolism, immune system, temperature regulation, digestion, movement, thinking, etc., without having to expend/waste unnecessary effort or energy to make sure its working the way it's supposed to. Flawless Coordination: The user's physical abilities are heightened to the point where they can perform any physical act without difficulty. The user merely needs to imagine themselves doing the act in their mind, then they're able to perform it without any problem. This could range from free running, to juggling swords, to doing multiple back-flips. Skill Replication; The user is able to mimic and replicate the skills and talents of others around oneself, and be able to use those skills and talents as one's own. these aren't totally over powered and will help him have a head start. he can use skill replication on the things he kills. and thanks for the chapter.

not going to lie the first chapter sucked. the author went in and out first-person and third-person point of view multiple times while writing. also the scenes were jumbled around a bunch making it somewhat difficult to establish where the main character is

it shocked me that he is good looking but he doesn't have a gf 😂😂😂

ayeee that was a great start and a great cliffhanger too! :D

I believe that making him extremely intelligent was a mistake, many authors do this but end up not being intelligent enough to write a character with such an intellect, but other than that, it was a good start so far

eh ill give it a chance the only prob i have with these is when u say the character is a genius(can be only as smart as u r) then they do something stupid it can be frusstrating

thanks for the chapter

worlds genius. why does it sound like he's going to be an idiot.

Thanks

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nice work dude keep it up

The system is in trouble, new host is a genius!

Good

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buen comienzo espero que siga asi

a banana peel? ...that's almost too comical..

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