Cinik
she is sad her mom died but we just glossing over the fact that she feels nothing about her dad dying and being exicuted? like what?
Interesting way of approaching One Piece. On what could happen if Ace actually had an older sister? I haven't thought of that when doing my story. The writing quality is also good, with that you bought me out. As an author doing the same type of fanfic, I'm quite pleased to see "big boy chapters" = lengthy chapters. Hope you good luck. Just take your time, build up your characters and other islands that maybe you'll create with patience and you'll never lack ideas. Probably you'll encounter some idiots giving you moronic comments on your story, just ignore them.