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Comments of chapter undefined of The Last of a Bloodline (One Piece)

The_King_Potato
The_King_PotatoLv1The_King_Potato

she is sad her mom died but we just glossing over the fact that she feels nothing about her dad dying and being exicuted? like what?

andrew_cowles
andrew_cowlesLv13andrew_cowles

She probably doesn’t exactly realise what happened. She also seems like a strong girl, and diddnt see her dad all that much in the grand scheme of things

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KingKarma_1766
KingKarma_1766Lv4KingKarma_1766

hope she becomes marine I feel bad for Garp if her precious granddaughter becomes a pirate

Old_Man_Sage
Old_Man_SageLv13Old_Man_Sage

I shall be the first comment! *Laughs like a villain*

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Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

Interesting way of approaching One Piece. On what could happen if Ace actually had an older sister? I haven't thought of that when doing my story. The writing quality is also good, with that you bought me out. As an author doing the same type of fanfic, I'm quite pleased to see "big boy chapters" = lengthy chapters. Hope you good luck. Just take your time, build up your characters and other islands that maybe you'll create with patience and you'll never lack ideas. Probably you'll encounter some idiots giving you moronic comments on your story, just ignore them.

xbch
xbchLv2xbch

will you continue the story or quit again?

KumaKuma0
KumaKuma0Lv3KumaKuma0

Hope she gets strong enough so that if Ace is to be executed she can change something