Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

I really hope he doesn't start gaining Kekkei Genkai easily like in other fanfics. I think it would ruin the novel. Actually I think he should just have 1 Kekkei Genkai or none at all.

why is he so choked up everytime he met hiruzen tho?

I think he has been brainwashed by hiruzen

I hate this "sensitive" personality of the mc, it's easily explainable, but it's annoying

Maybe this is part of some complex plot 🤔 Mc is acting like a kid rather than a reincarnator. It is possible the previous owners feelings are lingering somewhere inside affecting his thinking. Say what you want even if lord 3rd is good guy and all. His friendly relationship with danzo makes is difficult to trust him. Especially knowing the fates of many canon characters

Easily manipulated MC

Aqui vemos el comienzo de naruto 2.0,por solo unas pocas interacciones con hiruzen ya se esta preocupando por su muerte....

Could you have him get a Ketsuryugan and could you have him get a Kekkei Genkai like Steel Release, Dark Release, Storm Release, Ice Release or Lava Release also could you have him save Zabuza, Haku, Team Dosu, Team Shigure and the Sound 5

interactions with hiruzen is pretty cringe...

Thanks for this great chapter. I really hope MC doesn't have keke genkai or other overpowered jutsu like 8 doors. your story is for the moment very balanced and original, the fanfiction where MC becomes overpowered easily and wins lots of keke genkei are stupid. especially since MC is a civilian ninja, and still strong genin

people are so mad that Hiruzen is a nice old grandpa lol

Talk about brainwashing..i'd be disappointed if he starts sharing his future knowledge

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Me gusta mucho lo hambriento de afecto que esta el Mc, tiene sentido porque se siente solo, así que puedo entender que aprecie tanto a hiruzen a pesar del poco tiempo que llevan conociéndose. Joder incluso yo me preocuparía por la vida de otra persona si supiera lo que le sucederá. La gente que dice que es cringe no le sabe a las buenas historas hermano son puro edgys que esperan que el prota este cogiendose a las waifus en el primer capitulo asdasdasda

Mais uma alma que o Velho Maldito iludiu! Kkkk

MC and author likes the old man... That's new

thank for chapter

i can read anymore all people how use browser have this problem they whant to force use to use the app lok at the from to see so autor can you poste chapter in other site? like scrubble hub