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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Conta2
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Ty

ZackRPG
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F for the MC they told him that they would transmigrate him but they only stole his memory and gave it to another person xD

Madara_Otsutsuki_
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this is not transmigration

Gabichu_Yeah
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then a random naruto with memories of someone from earth. That's not transmigration, click bait boi

WalterHeisenberg
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The og body in Naruto world died, and the *soul* of the Mc invaded the body and practically became its replacement soul since the soul of the og body died and went somewhere. Idk how it became a 2 people with memories equals the current Mc being confused about the system and most of the stuff the og deiki’s body never knew about. This isn’t transmigration, it’s someone from naruto world receiving memories of the soul Mc of earth…………

TeaTop
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If this is about an OC, why is it called transmigration?? Seeing as he got the memories of the other dude and there isn't even a hint of consciousness from the other dude. Him saying "we're one", when it's clear you just absorbed the other guy makes zero sense.

Yuujii_14
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He swears a lot. As though the world and its people owe him something, calling everyone names as if he's asking that he should be treated the same way as others. Dude, you failed that's why you're like that, stop blaming everyone. I literally prefer the MC at the beginning, not this loser of an MC.

Admiral_Kizaru
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oh no its jordinio again im sure this will be a good one but will never be completed

Dazai_Osamu_2088
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it's really an interesting fanfic and really addictive (personal opinion)👍👍👍

Deadrule_vivek
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good starts but it's not transmigration it's just someone getting an extra set of memories that's it .....

Sirrow
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Author make pls a tensei slime fanfic !!

BrenimKK
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why half of the chapters are from the chunnin exam? Is the pace of the story that slow?

Maizuky_Nichan
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Hum...

xxYoungMasterxx
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Why does every chapter have so many parts? Is it taking so long to write every event?

CherryPoPsicle
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the mc is the Shinobi not the one from earth ?

Mitchell_Moroni
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will you ever update your fairytail fanfic i liked it

Alpha_Ace
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Exp

dragonstorm09
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please keep updating your a genius I've never seen a self insert naruto gamer genin reserve story before this is definitely original I love it

_Alenkar
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does the author post the rest of the chapters of the other fanfictions on his patreon? i like his story, and i was going to break my virginity with him (first time i spend money on something outside my country) but if i am going to receive only half of his story... it is a little ten

MYTH_
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Thanks for sharing this with us, Author-san. Loved the first chapter 🤌

Ethan_Venable
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Is your blazing fists fic cancelled