Shinoerah
good chapter, interesting beginning, the only thing that I feel that does not make sense is how they caught him ?, with his peculiarity it should have been easy to go unnoticed, and if he was caught for stealing because he needed money, it is stupid! Since apparently he was a medical student? Or am I wrong? Couldn't he easily seduce a millionaire woman and make her his wife? Thus, having access to her money? -the only realistic way to say, to be caught with his peculiarity so good of seduction, would be that he had met a hero who read minds!thus discovering this nosy hero his misdeeds.
117 comments just got deleted on this single chapter cause I'm editing the story here and there before continuing to write. Once again, this is like, the fifth time whole paragraphs I don't touch got obliterated for no reason. I'm sorry for the inconvenience; a lot of interactions between readers just disappeared.
you did a very poor job of explaining his reasons and now it seems that your just spitting words to cover your mistake please explain this correctly and his reason to becoming like this the MC seems quite indecisive easy to manipulate and naive plus he lacks any Motivation to climb he social ladder and quite stupid or your portrayal of him is quite weak my opinion you should've gone on with this chapte longer and desired or elaborated more clearly about MC intention in less confusing way also why he protect the warden is this some kinds of foreshadowing to him neither becoming a hero or assisting them in any way except fighting
Im sorry, i have sinned. Comments Were at 69 but now with this one its 70. Forgive me. Also ive seen this story floating around but i didnt read it since i wasnt sure what you would do with a hormone quirk. However im going to give it a shot now, hopefully his hormone quirk ends up being massively OP as it should be and you dont purposefully nerf the MC.